comma splice
Definition: The case where two independent clauses are joined by just a comma.
Note: This is usually considered to be a solecism.
Example: I was really hungry, there was no food to eat.
Some ways to correct this are:
(1) Turn the two clauses into two sentences
(I was really hungry. There was no food to eat.).
(2) Replace the comma with a semicolon.
(3) Insert a coordinating conjunction after the comma ( I was really hungry, and there was no food to eat.).
Note: If the clauses are short, you can get away with using just a comma ( I came, I saw, I spliced.).
Quotation: "If two or more clauses, grammatically complete and not joined by a conjunction, are to form a single compound sentence, the proper mark of punctuation is a semicolon."
(Source: The Elements of Style — William Strunk)


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